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How was Athenian democracy criticised by its contemporaries, and how fair were their criticisms?

Democracy and the Athenians: the contemporary criticisms of the democracy from the Old Oligarch, Thucydides, Plato and Aristophanes, the charges of mob rule, incompetence and instability, and the evaluation of these criticisms.

An OCR A-Level Classical Civilisation (H408/34) study of the contemporary criticisms of Athenian democracy. Covers the attacks of the Old Oligarch, Thucydides, Plato and Aristophanes, the charges of mob rule, incompetence and instability, and how to evaluate these criticisms, with the source and essay skills the paper rewards.

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What this dot point is asking

Athenian democracy had powerful contemporary critics, and weighing their charges is central to the option. For this option you must understand the criticisms from the Old Oligarch, Thucydides, Plato and Aristophanes, the charges of mob rule, incompetence and instability, and how to evaluate these criticisms. The paper tests precise knowledge (AO1), analysis and evaluation of sources (AO2 and AO3) and your own argument.

The answer

The Old Oligarch: rule by the worst

Thucydides and Plato: the historian and the philosopher

Two of the greatest writers offer deeper critiques:

  • Thucydides, though not a simple opponent, contrasts the responsible leadership of Pericles with the demagogues who followed, and records moments of democratic folly (the volatility of the Assembly, the execution of the generals after the battle of Arginusae). His verdict on Periclean Athens, "in name a democracy but in fact ruled by its first citizen," implies the people needed firm guidance.
  • Plato is the most hostile. In works such as the Republic and Gorgias he condemns democracy as a flawed regime that mistakes liberty for licence, lets the ignorant rule, and falls prey to flattery and demagoguery. He blamed the democracy for the death of Socrates, his teacher, condemned by a popular court.

Aristophanes: the comic critic

Evaluating the criticisms

The recurring charges, and how far they hold, must be weighed:

  • Mob rule: the ignorant masses dominating the educated, the central oligarchic complaint.
  • Incompetence: decisions made by amateurs without expertise, though key military posts were elected for that reason.
  • Instability: volatile, reversible decisions (the Mytilene debate), and the oligarchic coups of 411 and 404 BC that briefly overthrew the democracy.

These criticisms identify real weaknesses, but the critics were largely hostile elites (oligarchs, philosophers, satirists). Against them, the democracy was stable for long periods, won and ran an empire, and could correct itself (the Mytilene reversal). The criticisms must therefore be evaluated critically, not simply accepted.

Examples in context

A strong 10-mark idea answer on the Old Oligarch would give its key complaints (rule by the worst, serving the masses, the link to naval power) and note its hostile bias.

Try this

Q1. Explain Plato's main objections to democracy. You must refer to specific examples. [10 marks]

  • What the marker wants. AO1 with AO3: give Plato's objections (liberty as licence, rule by the ignorant, vulnerability to flattery and demagoguery, the death of Socrates) and explain his philosophical standpoint, while noting his hostility.

Q2. 'The instability of the democracy was its most serious flaw.' To what extent do you agree? [marked out of 20; real H408/34 tariff is 30]

  • Cue. Argue both sides: the volatility of the Assembly and the coups of 411 and 404 show real instability, but the democracy was also stable for long periods and could correct itself. Reach a judgement supported by named examples.

Exam-style practice questions

Practice questions written in the style of OCR exam questions on this dot point, with worked answer explainers. The year tag is the paper they imitate, not the source.

OCR H408/34 2020 (idea style)10 marksExplain the main criticisms the Old Oligarch makes of Athenian democracy. You must refer to specific examples. [10]
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A 10-mark idea question (AO1 with AO3), answered from your wider knowledge.

Establish the source: the Old Oligarch (Pseudo-Xenophon) is a short pamphlet attacking the democracy from an oligarchic viewpoint.

Give specific examples: the complaint that the democracy empowers the "worst" (the poor and ignorant) over the "best", that it serves the interest of the masses rather than the city, and that the naval power of Athens depends on the lower-class rowers, which is why they hold power. Note that the author concedes the system works logically for its own ends.

Conclude on the value and bias of this hostile but revealing source.

OCR H408/34 2021 (essay, true tariff 30)20 marks'The ancient criticisms of Athenian democracy were justified.' To what extent do you agree? [marked here out of 20; the real H408/34 essay tariff is 30]
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The extended-essay type (30 marks live, capped at 20 here). Tests AO1, AO2 and AO3.

For (justified). Critics charged the democracy with mob rule, incompetence (the masses lacking expertise) and instability (volatile decisions, as in the Mytilene debate, or the execution of the generals after Arginusae); the oligarchic coups of 411 and 404 show real weaknesses.

Against (biased and unfair). The critics (the Old Oligarch, Plato, Aristophanes) were largely hostile elites; the democracy was stable for long periods, won an empire, and could correct itself (the Mytilene reversal).

Judgement. The top band argues a clear line, for instance that the criticisms identify real weaknesses (volatility, the risk of poor expertise) but are coloured by elite hostility, so they must be weighed critically rather than accepted. Support with named sources.

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