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How do you plan a 25-mark Advanced Higher History essay and analyse the factors so they argue rather than describe?

Planning the essay: reading the command word, selecting and grouping the relevant factors, isolating and weighing each, and using detailed evidence to analyse rather than narrate so each factor answers the question.

How to plan a 25-mark SQA Advanced Higher History essay and analyse its factors. Covers reading the command word, selecting and grouping factors, isolating and weighing each, and using detailed evidence to analyse rather than narrate so every paragraph answers the question.

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  1. What this key area is asking
  2. Read the command word first
  3. Select and group the factors
  4. Analyse, paragraph by paragraph
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What this key area is asking

A 25-mark essay lives or dies on the plan: which factors you select, how you group them, and whether each one is analysed against the question rather than described. This page covers reading the command word, selecting and grouping the factors, and the analytical habit, opening each paragraph with a claim and weighing it, that keeps the essay arguing under time pressure.

Read the command word first

Each command word asks for a slightly different argument, but all of them demand weighing, not describing. "To what extent" and "how important" ask you to judge the weight of a named factor against the others. "How far do you agree" asks for a case for and against a stated view. "Analyse the relative importance" asks you to rank the factors. Reading it correctly is the first planning decision.

Select and group the factors

Spend the first minutes listing the factors that bear on the question, grouping related points, and noting the strongest evidence and the relevant historiography for each. Then decide your line of argument: which factor mattered most, or which side of the stated view the evidence supports. This plan, three to five grouped factors, each with evidence and a position, is what the essay then executes.

Analyse, paragraph by paragraph

Each paragraph follows the same analytical shape: open with a claim about the factor's importance, support it with detailed evidence, weigh it against the question and the other factors, and reference historiography. Opening with a claim, not a date, is the habit that keeps the paragraph arguing. A paragraph that opens "In 1917..." is about to narrate; one that opens "The most decisive factor was..." is about to argue.

Examples in context

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Q1. Why should you read the command word before planning? [2 marks]

  • Cue. It tells you the task (weigh a factor, judge a view, or rank importance), which shapes the whole plan.

Q2. What should each body paragraph open with, and why? [2 marks]

  • Cue. A claim about the factor's importance, not a date, so the paragraph argues and weighs rather than narrates.

Exam-style practice questions

Practice questions written in the style of SQA exam questions on this dot point, with worked answer explainers. The year tag is the paper they imitate, not the source.

SQA AH essay (25 marks)Plan an answer to a 'how far do you agree' essay in the chosen field, identifying the factors to weigh.
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A planning task. "How far do you agree" invites an argued case for and against a stated view.

Read the command word and the named view, then select the factors that support it and those that challenge it, grouping related points. For each factor, note the strongest evidence and how historians have judged it. Decide a line of argument before writing: which side the evidence best supports and why. The plan should show a sequence of factors, each tied to the question, building towards a judgement, not a chronological list of events. A clear plan is what keeps the essay analytical under time pressure.

SQA AH essay (25 marks)Analyse the relative importance of the factors behind an outcome in the chosen field.
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An "analyse the relative importance" essay.

The command word demands weighing factors against one another, not describing them. Plan a paragraph per factor, each opening with a claim about its importance relative to the others, supported by detailed evidence and historiography. The relative judgement is the point: state not just that a factor mattered but how much, compared with the rest. A plan that ranks the factors and notes the evidence for each ranking keeps the essay analytical and drives it towards a conclusion that weighs them.

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