What is a style model, and how do you analyse and use one for the coursework?
Using style models for Edexcel Component 3: choosing published texts as models, analysing their genre conventions, voice and linguistic features, and emulating them in original writing while preparing to reference them in the commentary.
An Edexcel A-Level English Language and Literature (9EL0) answer on using style models for Component 3: choosing strong published models, analysing their genre conventions, voice and linguistic features, emulating them deliberately in original writing, and referencing them in the analytical commentary for AO4.
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What this dot point is asking
The original writing in Component 3 is based on published style models: real texts in your chosen genres that you analyse and emulate. Edexcel wants you to choose strong models, analyse their genre conventions, voice and linguistic features, emulate them deliberately in your own writing (which serves AO5), and reference them in your commentary (which serves AO4). The style model is the hinge between the two assignments: it informs the craft of the writing and provides the material for the connections in the commentary. Understanding how to use a model well is therefore central to scoring across the whole component.
The answer
What a style model is
The model serves two purposes at once. For the original writing (AO5), it teaches the craft of the genre, so your emulation is informed rather than improvised. For the commentary (AO4), it provides the point of connection: you analyse how your choices relate to the model's. Choosing a model you genuinely admire and understand, in a genre you want to write, makes both purposes easier, because you will emulate it with conviction and have plenty to say about the relationship.
Analysing the model
Before drafting, analyse the model the way you analyse any text in the course. Identify its genre and the conventions that go with it: its register (formality, specialism), its structure (how it opens, develops and closes), and its voice (the persona it constructs). Then analyse its linguistic features: the lexis and semantic fields it favours, its characteristic syntax and rhythm, its graphology if relevant, and any signature techniques. This analysis is the same integrated method you apply elsewhere, and it produces the understanding you will emulate and the observations you will reference.
Emulating and referencing
In the original writing, emulate the model's analysed techniques: construct a comparable voice, adopt a structural device, work in the genre's register, deploy similar linguistic features, all in service of your own subject and purpose. In the commentary, reference the model explicitly: quote both your writing and the model, and analyse how your choices follow, adapt or depart from it. This is the AO4 connection, and it demonstrates that your reading has shaped your writing. Reference the model accurately and properly, as the coursework requires honest acknowledgement of influences and sources.
Examples in context
Example 1. Fiction model. A published short story can model narrative voice, point of view, pacing and structure. Analysing how the writer handles these, then emulating the techniques in your own fiction, grounds the writing and gives the commentary concrete connections to draw.
Example 2. Creative non-fiction model. A published memoir or travelogue models the reflective first-person voice, the evocation of place or experience, and the structure of creative non-fiction. Emulating its techniques produces a controlled piece and a commentary rich in analysed connections.
Try this
Q1. What is a style model? [2 marks]
- Cue. A published, professional text in your chosen genre that you analyse and emulate, learning its conventions and techniques for your own writing.
Q2. What does it mean to emulate a model rather than imitate it? [3 marks]
- Cue. Emulation is the deliberate, analysed adoption, adaptation or departure from the model's techniques applied to your own subject and purpose, not copying its content.
Q3. Why is the style model the hinge between the two assignments? [2 marks]
- Cue. It disciplines the original writing (AO5) and provides the concrete connections the commentary analyses (AO4), serving both assignments.
Exam-style practice questions
Practice questions written in the style of Pearson Edexcel exam questions on this dot point, with worked answer explainers. The year tag is the paper they imitate, not the source.
Edexcel 201920 marksAnalyse a published style model in a chosen genre, identifying the features you will emulate in your own writing. (Coursework preparation task.)Show worked answer →
A Component 3 preparation task: analysing a style model, which underpins both the original writing (AO5) and the commentary (AO4).
- Analyse the conventions
- Identify the model's genre and its conventions of register, structure, voice and characteristic features (lexis, syntax, graphology). This analysis is the basis for deliberate emulation.
- Select features to emulate
- Choose the specific techniques you will adopt: a narrative voice, a structural device, a register, a lexical habit. Emulation is deliberate adoption of analysed techniques, not imitation of content.
- Prepare the connection
- Note how you will follow, adapt or depart from the model, because the commentary must connect your choices to it (AO4). This analysis serves both assignments.
Edexcel 202120 marksExplain how your style model influenced your original writing, referring to specific features of both. (Coursework commentary task; assessed for AO1 to AO4.)Show worked answer →
A Component 3 commentary task on the influence of the style model, assessed for AO1 to AO4 (especially AO4 connection).
- Connect your writing to the model (AO4)
- Show specific links: a technique you adopted, adapted or deliberately departed from. Quote both your writing and the model, and analyse the relationship.
- Analyse the choices (AO1, AO2)
- Name your choices with metalanguage and analyse their effect, framed by the model's conventions. Context (AO3) where the genre or audience is relevant.
- Influence, not imitation
- Show a considered relationship to the model (following its conventions, adapting them to your purpose, or departing from them for effect), not slavish copying. This demonstrates the integrated understanding the component rewards.
Related dot points
- The Component 3 coursework (Investigating and Creating Texts) for Edexcel: the non-exam assessment of original writing plus an analytical commentary, its two assignments, word counts, marks and how AO5 and AO1 to AO4 are assessed and moderated.
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- Connections across texts (AO4) for Edexcel: what AO4 assesses, how to make genuine comparative connections informed by linguistic and literary concepts, and how to sustain comparison across the Comparing Voices, Section B and NEA tasks.
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- Written and digital genres for Edexcel Component 1: analysing letters, journalism, reviews, travelogues, blogs and social media in the anthology, their genre conventions, and how lexis, structure, graphology and blended features build a written or digital voice.
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Sources & how we know this
- Pearson Edexcel A-Level English Language and Literature (9EL0) specification — Pearson Edexcel (2015)