How do you plan and write the 25-mark AQA History essay so it argues a case rather than just narrating events?
The 25-mark AO1 essay: deconstructing the question, planning an argument, using precise evidence, evaluating throughout, and reaching a substantiated judgement in the conclusion.
How to plan and write the AQA A-Level History 25-mark essay that appears in both papers. Covers deconstructing the question, planning an argument, deploying precise evidence, evaluating throughout, and reaching a substantiated judgement for the AO1 marks.
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What this dot point is asking
Both papers contain 25-mark essays testing AO1: analysis, evaluation and a substantiated judgement. The examiner rewards a sustained argument answering the exact question, not a narrative of events. This is the skill that earns most marks across the A-level.
Deconstruct the question
A claim-based stem ("assess the validity of this view") expects you to weigh the claim for and against and decide how far it holds. A factor stem ("how far was X the main reason") expects you to compare X against other factors and rank them. Both are AO1 tasks, so both reward the same core skill: a sustained argument, not coverage. AQA's generic levels mark scheme rewards "sustained analysis" and "a substantiated judgement" at the top level (level 5), and penalises "description" or "narrative" with an unsupported assertion at the lower levels, so the whole game is to argue rather than tell the story.
Plan an argument
Spend two or three minutes planning. Decide your overall judgement first, then order the paragraphs so the argument builds towards it. A useful discipline is to write a one-sentence thesis at the top of your plan and a topic sentence for each paragraph; if a topic sentence does not contain a judgement word ("the decisive factor", "more important than", "only partly"), it is probably describing rather than arguing. Each paragraph should answer the question, not just narrate a topic.
Evidence and evaluation
- Precise evidence. Use specific dates, figures, names and events, not vague generalisation. "Unemployment reached around six million by early 1933" is worth far more than "things got bad".
- Evaluate as you go. After making a point, weigh its importance and link it back to the question, rather than saving all judgement for the conclusion. The phrase "this mattered because" or "this was less important than" turns evidence into analysis.
- Counter-argument. Address the strongest opposing view and explain why your line still holds. Engaging and defeating a counter-argument is what separates a top-level answer from a one-sided one.
- Signposting. Make the structure visible so the examiner can see the argument building: connect each paragraph to the last and to the overall judgement.
The conclusion
The conclusion delivers a substantiated judgement that follows from the body. It should rank the factors or decide the claim explicitly, not introduce new material, repeat the introduction, or sit on the fence. A strong conclusion often acknowledges the strongest opposing point and then explains why your judgement still stands, showing the decision is reasoned rather than asserted.
Try this
Q1. What does the command "assess the validity of this view" require? [2 marks]
- Cue. Weighing the claim for and against, then judging how far it holds.
Q2. What should the conclusion do? [2 marks]
- Cue. Deliver a substantiated judgement that follows from the argument, without new material.
Exam-style practice questions
Practice questions written in the style of AQA exam questions on this dot point, with worked answer explainers. The year tag is the paper they imitate, not the source.
AQA 201920 marks'The most important reason for a major development in your period was a single named factor.' Assess the validity of this view. (Component 1 or 2, AO1 essay, rescoped from 25)Show worked answer →
The "assess the validity" stem demands a ranked argument, not a narrative.
Plan first: decide your line of argument and overall judgement before writing, then build three or four analytical paragraphs around it.
Each paragraph: make a point that answers the question, support it with precise evidence (dates, names, figures), and evaluate its weight against the named factor.
Conclusion: reach a substantiated judgement that follows from the body, ranking the factors rather than restating them. Sustained, evidenced analysis with a clear judgement reaches the top level (16 to 20).
AQA 202120 marks'How far' was a named factor responsible for an outcome in your period? Explain your answer. (Component 1 or 2, AO1 essay, rescoped from 25)Show worked answer →
A "how far" factor question expects you to compare the named factor with other factors and rank them.
Plan: decide where the named factor ranks, then order the paragraphs so the argument builds towards that judgement.
Each paragraph: weigh one factor, comparing its importance to the named factor and linking explicitly back to "how far".
Conclusion: deliver a ranked judgement (for example, the named factor mattered but was not decisive). Markers reward comparison and ranking; a balanced list with no decision stays mid-level.
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Sources & how we know this
- AQA A-level History (7042) specification — AQA (2015)